User talk:Kmeilak - Revision history

Dondi: Add week 9 feedback.

2013-11-30T00:20:34Z

Add week 9 feedback.

Kdahlquist: gave week 8 interim feedback

2013-10-14T23:10:13Z

gave week 8 interim feedback

Dondi: /* Week 6 Feedback */ new section

2013-10-12T19:16:45Z

‎Week 6 Feedback: new section

Kdahlquist: /* Week 2 Feedback */ follow-up added

2013-10-11T21:58:51Z

‎Week 2 Feedback: follow-up added

Kdahlquist: /* Week 5 Database Wiki */ completed feedback

2013-10-11T21:05:08Z

‎Week 5 Database Wiki: completed feedback

Kdahlquist: /* Week 5 Feedback */ started section for week 5 database wiki

2013-10-11T21:03:00Z

‎Week 5 Feedback: started section for week 5 database wiki

Kdahlquist: completed week 5 feedback

2013-10-08T23:01:11Z

completed week 5 feedback

Dondi: /* Makeup Point Update */ new section

2013-09-30T05:05:26Z

‎Makeup Point Update: new section

Dondi: /* Week 4 Feedback */ new section

2013-09-25T05:56:30Z

‎Week 4 Feedback: new section

Dondi: /* Week 3 Feedback */ new section

2013-09-15T05:25:08Z

‎Week 3 Feedback: new section

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		+	== Week 9 Feedback ==
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		+	Your week 9 work has (finally) been reviewed:
		+	* Three out of the four file versions, as specified by the testing report template, are not listed.
		+	* You logged all of the needed import/processing/export times.
		+	* You successfully uploaded your .gdb file to the wiki.
		+	* You successfully ran the Tally Engine.
		+	* You successfully ran xmlpipedb-match.
		+	* You successfully ran the appropriate PostgreSQL query.
		+	* You successfully examined your .gdb file in Microsoft Access and compared its data against the benchmark version of the ''V. cholerae'' gene database.
		+	* You correctly noted differences and similarities in the ID tallies from your various counts.
		+	* You clearly indicated the ID pattern used for your ID searches/tallies.
		+	* Your lab notebook effectively documents your activities and results for this assignment.
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		+	Finally, your work was submitted on time and all specified wiki links and navigational aids were correctly included. Well done!
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		+	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 16:20, 29 November 2013 (PST)
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	== Week 8 Interim Feedback ==		== Week 8 Interim Feedback ==

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		+	== Week 8 Interim Feedback ==
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		+	* I have reviewed your files from part 1 of Week 8. They are correct and ready to go for Tuesday. ''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 16:10, 14 October 2013 (PDT)''
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	== Week 1 Feedback ==		== Week 1 Feedback ==

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	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 14:05, 11 October 2013 (PDT)''		''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 14:05, 11 October 2013 (PDT)''
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		+	== Week 6 Feedback ==
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		+	Thank you for submitting everything on time!
		+	* The wiki markup for movies-with-apostrophe query does not reproduce the query correctly because the wiki interprets repeated apostrophes as starting either bold or italic text; to render the apostrophes accurately, you need the '''nowiki''' tag (like this: <nowiki>''''</nowiki> [view the wiki source to see how it’s done]).
		+	* In your movies-beginning-with-the-word-“Star” query, you miss adding a space before the '''%''' in your ''"Star%"'' pattern—this matches more rows than desired, because without the space, your query will also get movies whose titles start with the words “Stare,” “Startle,” “Stark,” or “Start,” to name a few.
		+	* Your last, individual query joins the ''member'' table, but that table is not actually necessary. When working with databases, we are sensitive to doing more work than necessary, because sometimes this additional work strongly detracts from speed, particularly if the tables contain large numbers of rows. An extra but unnecessary join will also, in some cases, change the results that you get back.
		+	* The 8th query, which requests for counts by rating, is missing the ''group by'' clause. Thus, you needed to manually tally up the number of movies that got each individual rating. This was manageable for the small data set, but becomes unwieldy with large ones.
		+	* The 9th query, which seeks the average rating for movies beginning with the word “Star,” has the same issue as the 4th query.
		+	* All your other database queries were correct and properly documented.
		+	* You have settled very nicely into the habit of providing all of the requested links that make the navigation of your wiki work as easy as possible.
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		+	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 12:16, 12 October 2013 (PDT)

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	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 15:03, 11 September 2013 (PDT)''		''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 15:03, 11 September 2013 (PDT)''
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		+	=== Week 2 Follow-up ===
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		+	* Thank you for making all requested corrections.
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		+	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 14:58, 11 October 2013 (PDT)''

	== Week 3 Feedback ==		== Week 3 Feedback ==

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	=== Week 5 Database Wiki ===		=== Week 5 Database Wiki ===
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		+	* This assignment is complete and on time.
		+	* You are missing a link from your user page to the Spliceosome Database wiki page you created. You are using your template well to provide all of the other links, don't forget to add this one.
		+	* The assignment asked for links to all pages from which you answered the questions, not just one link to the main page of the database.
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		+	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 14:05, 11 October 2013 (PDT)''

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	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 16:01, 8 October 2013 (PDT)''		''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 16:01, 8 October 2013 (PDT)''
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		+	=== Week 5 Database Wiki ===

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	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 22:05, 29 September 2013 (PDT)		—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 22:05, 29 September 2013 (PDT)
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		+	== Week 5 Feedback ==
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		+	This is feedback on the Week 5 individual assignment (UniProt Exercise) and shared class reflection. Feedback on your Database wiki page will come later.
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		+	* Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
		+	* Your electronic lab notebook was neat and complete. Moving forward starting with the [[Week 8]] assignment, this will be an important part of each weekly assignment. Keep in mind the guideline that you or someone else should be able to reproduce what you did using only the information on your journal entry page. Your page could have been enhanced by showing one or more screenshots from your database exploration.
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		+	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 16:01, 8 October 2013 (PDT)''

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	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 22:56, 24 September 2013 (PDT)		—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 22:56, 24 September 2013 (PDT)
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		+	== Makeup Point Update ==
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		+	You have been credited for making the following change(s) to a wiki link checklist:
		+	* The missing link from your user page to the Week 3 shared journal page has been added.
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		+	If you have any questions, let me know. Thank you!
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		+	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 22:05, 29 September 2013 (PDT)

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	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 22:25, 14 September 2013 (PDT)		—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 22:25, 14 September 2013 (PDT)
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		+	== Week 4 Feedback ==
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		+	Thank you for submitting your work on time! Here’s how your “automated annotation” work turned out, item by item. Items that had issues are italicized:
		+	* -35 box was correctly identified with an appropriate command.
		+	* -10 box was correctly identified with an appropriate command.
		+	* ''Your transcription start site was off by one base.''
		+	* Ribosome binding site was correctly identified with an appropriate command.
		+	* Start codon was correctly identified with an appropriate command.
		+	* Stop codon ''sequence'' was correctly identified, ''but the supplied command does not indicate its location''.
		+	* The terminator sequence was correctly identified ''but the command used to identify it makes more assumptions than were given in the consensus information''.
		+	* The mRNA strand matches the range given by the transcription start site and the terminator ''but it was complemented when it should not have been''.
		+	* ''The amino acid sequence was incorrect, and no command was given to show where the computation might have gone wrong.''
		+	In terms of your wiki link routine, everything was there—keep it up!
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		+	Let me know if you have any questions.
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		+	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 22:56, 24 September 2013 (PDT)

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	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 15:03, 11 September 2013 (PDT)''		''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 15:03, 11 September 2013 (PDT)''
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		+	== Week 3 Feedback ==
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		+	* Thank you for submitting your assignment on time!
		+	* Your '''sed''' and '''match''' skills are great! All of your commands were correct.
		+	* For the '''match''' questions, you did not provide speculative answers on what the search patterns could represent.
		+	* Your user page was missing a link to the [[Class Journal Week 3]] page. Strongly consider using a template for this, so that you will only need to edit these links in one place. Let me know if you need additional help with getting a template to work as needed.
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		+	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 22:25, 14 September 2013 (PDT)