User talk:Slouie - Revision history

Dondi: Add week 9 feedback.

2013-11-29T21:24:15Z

Add week 9 feedback.

Kdahlquist: note that week 8 files OK to go

2013-10-14T22:49:51Z

note that week 8 files OK to go

Dondi: /* Week 6 Feedback */ new section

2013-10-12T18:37:30Z

‎Week 6 Feedback: new section

Kdahlquist: /* Week 2 Feedback */ added follow-up

2013-10-11T21:58:25Z

‎Week 2 Feedback: added follow-up

Kdahlquist: /* Database Wiki Feedback */ completed feedback

2013-10-11T21:09:48Z

‎Database Wiki Feedback: completed feedback

Kdahlquist: /* Week 5 Feedback */ started section for db wiki feedback

2013-10-11T21:08:46Z

‎Week 5 Feedback: started section for db wiki feedback

Kdahlquist: completed week 5 feedback

2013-10-08T23:15:57Z

completed week 5 feedback

Dondi: /* Makeup Point Update */ Clarify that updates pertained to week 3 page.

2013-09-30T05:37:21Z

‎Makeup Point Update: Clarify that updates pertained to week 3 page.

Dondi: /* Makeup Point Update */ new section

2013-09-30T05:00:09Z

‎Makeup Point Update: new section

Ajvree: /* Group work */ new section

2013-09-26T23:46:15Z

‎Group work: new section

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		+	== Week 9 Feedback ==
		+
		+	Your week 9 work has (finally) been reviewed:
		+	* Three out of the four file versions, as specified by the testing report template, are not listed.
		+	* You logged all of the needed import/processing/export times.
		+	* You noted that there were problems with your .gdb file to the wiki, but by all accounts this was most likely a transient problem, and there is no indication that you went back and tried to upload the file again.
		+	* You successfully ran the Tally Engine.
		+	* You appear to have successfully run xmlpipedb-match, but reported only the results without posting primary documentation of this activity (e.g., screenshots, exact numeric output).
		+	* There is no indication that you successfully ran the appropriate PostgreSQL query.
		+	* You successfully examined your .gdb file in Microsoft Access, but did not compare the data against the benchmark version of the ''V. cholerae'' gene database.
		+	* You correctly noted differences and similarities in the ID tallies from your various counts.
		+	* You clearly indicated the ID pattern used for your ID searches/tallies.
		+	* Your lab notebook effectively documents your activities and results for this assignment.
		+
		+	Finally, your work was submitted on time and all specified wiki links and navigational aids were correctly included, except for the link from your journal entry page back to your user page and inclusion of the ''Journal Entry'' category.
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		+	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 13:24, 29 November 2013 (PST)
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	== Week 8 Interim Feedback ==		== Week 8 Interim Feedback ==

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		+	== Week 8 Interim Feedback ==
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		+	* Your files are correct and ready to go for Tuesday. ''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 15:49, 14 October 2013 (PDT)''
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	== Week 1 Feedback ==		== Week 1 Feedback ==

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	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 14:09, 11 October 2013 (PDT)		''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 14:09, 11 October 2013 (PDT)
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		+	== Week 6 Feedback ==
		+
		+	Thank you for submitting everything on time!
		+	* The wiki markup for movies-with-apostrophe query does not reproduce the query correctly because the wiki interprets repeated apostrophes as starting either bold or italic text; to render the apostrophes accurately, you need the '''nowiki''' tag (like this: <nowiki>''''</nowiki> [view the wiki source to see how it’s done]).
		+	* I’m going to chalk this up to a typo because you still reached the right answer; still, in the query for movies whose titles begin with the word “Star,” you have a '''%''' wildcard that should not be there. '''%''' is for use with ''like'' but not with '''~'''.
		+	* The 5th query, which requests counts by year, is much easier to answer if you include ''year'' in the ''select'' clause. What you have still produces the right answer, but you have to be careful in determining which count pertains to which year. In particular, what if there was a year with zero movies? That might be missed in the tallies.
		+	* The 8th query, which requests for counts by rating, highlights this issue even more. Here, the query is missing the ''group by'' clause. Thus, you needed to manually tally up the number of movies that got each individual rating. This was manageable for the small data set, but becomes unwieldy with large ones.
		+	* The 9th query, which seeks the average rating for movies beginning with the word “Star,” has the same typo from the 4th query. This time, however, the incorrect average is reached.
		+	* All your other database queries were correct and properly documented.
		+	Regarding your navigation/wiki links, all is well except for a small oversight: your “Journal Entry” category was encoded as a wiki page, and not a Category.
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		+	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 11:37, 12 October 2013 (PDT)

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	P.S. I answered your queston on my user talk page. ''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 09:12, 12 September 2013 (PDT)''		P.S. I answered your queston on my user talk page. ''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 09:12, 12 September 2013 (PDT)''
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		+	=== Week 2 Follow-up ===
		+
		+	* Thank you for making all requested corrections.
		+
		+	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 14:58, 11 October 2013 (PDT)''

	== Week 3 Feedback ==		== Week 3 Feedback ==

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	=== Database Wiki Feedback ===		=== Database Wiki Feedback ===
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		+	* Thank you for submitting your assignment on time. From the history, it looks like Alina was the main contributor to this page. This appears to be borne out by the fact that there are links missing from your user page to this page and from the database wiki page to your user page.
		+	* You could have been more specific as to which species were covered in the database.
		+	* OrganelleDB is not an example of a community database, a community database is basically like this wiki where a distributed set of users enters information directly into the database. Instead, OrganelleDB is an example of a specialty database.
		+	* You could have provided more information about the sample query you tried.
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		+	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 14:09, 11 October 2013 (PDT)

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	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 16:15, 8 October 2013 (PDT)''		''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 16:15, 8 October 2013 (PDT)''
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		+	=== Database Wiki Feedback ===

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	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 22:00, 29 September 2013 (PDT)		—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 22:00, 29 September 2013 (PDT)
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		+	== Week 5 Feedback ==
		+
		+	This is feedback on the Week 5 individual assignment (UniProt Exercise) and shared class reflection. Feedback on your Database wiki page will come later.
		+
		+	* Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
		+	* Your electronic lab notebook was an adequate description of what you did. Moving forward starting with the [[Week 8]] assignment, this will be an important part of each weekly assignment. Keep in mind the guideline that you or someone else should be able to reproduce what you did using only the information on your journal entry page. Your page could have been enhanced by providing hyperlinks to the pages you visited and by showing one or more screenshots from your database exploration. See some of your classmates' pages for how they did this.
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		+	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 16:15, 8 October 2013 (PDT)''

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 * Your 3'-5' reading frame commands now correctly apply a complement to their bases.
 * For the third '''match''' question, you have updated your reported results so that they are now based on the ''hs_ref_GRCh37_chr19.fa'' file, not ''493.P_falciparum.xml''.
-* The missing link from your journal answer page back to your user page has been added.
+* The missing link from your Week 3 journal answer page back to your user page has been added.
-* The missing ''Journal Entry'' category in your journal answer page has been added.
+* The missing ''Journal Entry'' category in your Week 3 journal answer page has been added.
 If you have any questions, let me know. Thank you!
 —[[User:Dondi|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi|talk]]) 22:00, 29 September 2013 (PDT)

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		+	== Makeup Point Update ==
		+
		+	You have been credited for making the following change(s) to an assignment or wiki link checklist:
		+	* Your 3'-5' reading frame commands now correctly apply a complement to their bases.
		+	* For the third '''match''' question, you have updated your reported results so that they are now based on the ''hs_ref_GRCh37_chr19.fa'' file, not ''493.P_falciparum.xml''.
		+	* The missing link from your journal answer page back to your user page has been added.
		+	* The missing ''Journal Entry'' category in your journal answer page has been added.
		+
		+	If you have any questions, let me know. Thank you!
		+
		+	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 22:00, 29 September 2013 (PDT)

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	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 22:06, 24 September 2013 (PDT)		—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 22:06, 24 September 2013 (PDT)
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		+	== Group work ==
		+
		+	Hey Stephen,
		+	Unfortunately I won't be able to make it to the library today.
		+	I did however set up the database and most of the questions needed
		+	for it. If you could finish those up for us I think we should be good
		+	at least for the journal tonight. We can set up another meeting to finish the other work.
		+	Feel free to contact me.
		+	3109412298