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Kdahlquist: /* Week 12 Feedback */ fixed formatting

2015-11-24T20:17:55Z

‎Week 12 Feedback: fixed formatting

Kdahlquist: gave week 12 feedback

2015-11-24T20:17:35Z

gave week 12 feedback

Dondi: Provide initial Week 6 feedback.

2015-10-26T02:28:13Z

Provide initial Week 6 feedback.

Dondi: Provide Week 4 feedback.

2015-10-05T07:36:13Z

Provide Week 4 feedback.

Dondi: Provide Week 3 feedback.

2015-09-27T01:16:45Z

Provide Week 3 feedback.

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 * I did not see a short progress report from you on your team's home page for Week 12.
-* I gave feedback on the next steps for your microarray data analysis and posted them on [[User_talk:Lenaolufson Lena's User Talk page.]]
+* I gave feedback on the next steps for your microarray data analysis and posted them on [[User_talk:Lenaolufson | Lena's User Talk page.]]
 ''&mdash; [[User:Kdahlquist|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist|talk]]) 12:17, 24 November 2015 (PST)''

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		+	== Week 12 Feedback ==
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		+	* I did not see a short progress report from you on your team's home page for Week 12.
		+	* I gave feedback on the next steps for your microarray data analysis and posted them on [[User_talk:Lenaolufson Lena's User Talk page.]]
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		+	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 12:17, 24 November 2015 (PST)''
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	== Week 6 Feedback ==		== Week 6 Feedback ==

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		+	== Week 6 Feedback ==
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		+	I’ve chosen to issue partial feedback sooner than complete feedback later, in case it will help you address issues with [[Week 8]].
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		+	=== Best Practices ===
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		+	* Individual and shared work were both submitted on time.
		+	* Some requisite links to and from the user page as well as page categories are missing:
		+	** The link from the individual journal page back to the user page was missed.
		+	** The journal entry category was missed.
		+	:''Please note that these best practices, when followed, expedite the navigation and review of your work. It saves clicks, and for grading purposes, those clicks add up.''
		+	* Electronic notebook was maintained.
		+	* Work was submitted in appropriate frequencies, but many submissions did not have corresponding summaries, defaulting only to the section title that was edited.
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		+	=== Database Exercises ===
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		+	Work in progress.
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		+	—''[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 19:28, 25 October 2015 (PDT)''
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	== Week 4 Feedback ==		== Week 4 Feedback ==

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		+	== Week 4 Feedback ==
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		+	* Work was submitted on time.
		+	* All good-habit items are mostly fulfilled:
		+	** All expected links and categories were noted.
		+	** Electronic notebook content was seen.
		+	** Summaries were provided for all but one of the submitted edits (though the edits were in decent chunks, so that was good).
		+	* For the exercises, the following issues were seen; all others were correct:
		+	** The command given for the –10 box is missing the <code>-r</code> option that makes the <code>{n}</code> shortcut possible.
		+	** You were off by one nucleotide on the transcription start site.
		+	** The terminator is not correctly tagged due to a missing line break (<code>\n</code>) that should have been part of the given command sequence.
		+	** The mRNA strand “inherits” the off-by-one error for the transcription start site, plus the electronic notebook commentary that accompanied your answer does not go into sufficient detail to indicate how exactly the commands chose (a) how the lines are to be broken up for deletion and (b) how the right lines can then be specified for this deletion.
		+	** For the amino acid sequence, the codon-to-amino-acid step is applied at the wrong time, resulting in incorrect results.
		+	** As a general note, be careful when you use direct markup tags such as <code><code></code></code>. A closing tag is missing at one point—you can tell because the formatting looks off for a few paragraphs when they shouldn’t look like code—and a key skill in using these tags is not forgetting to do this.
		+	* Shared responses were provided and they came in on time.
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		+	—''[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 00:36, 5 October 2015 (PDT)''
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	== Week 3 Feedback ==		== Week 3 Feedback ==

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		+	== Week 3 Feedback ==
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		+	* Work was submitted on time—keep it up!
		+	* In addition to the early feedback noted below regarding good-habit items, all expected links and categories were noted.
		+	* For your exercise responses:
		+	** Complement is correct.
		+	** Reading frames 1 and –1 are correct.
		+	** Reading frames 2, 3, –2, and –3 are incorrect: they do not include the enforced triplet grouping that makes the genetic code conversion take place on the right nucleotide triplets, and the “chopping” of unused bases for these reading frames adds a space in their stead. This latter is not necessarily incorrect, but makes the former step of breaking the bases up into the correct triples more difficult.
		+	** Your ''xmlpipedb-match'' responses are correct, except that for the second question, just saying that you used <code>grep</code> and <code>more</code> is insufficient. Additional details like what pattern you used in <code>grep</code> or how exactly <code>more</code> helped you with looking at the file will help a reader replicate what you did.
		+	** It is good that you tried out the <code>code</code> tag to help with formatting your responses, but make sure to always include the slash <code>/</code> in the closing tag so that the format doesn’t incorrectly “run past” the intended code section.
		+	* Thank you for your candid shared responses. I will try to supply additional details about the future commands that will be shown in class, as well as explain the results more thoroughly. For your part, please do not hesitate to raise your hands to ask questions or request clarifications. As Dr. Dahlquist mentioned earlier in the semester, your raised hand is your “handbrake” to ensure that the class can slow down to explain something further. Please use it when necessary.
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		+	—''[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 18:16, 26 September 2015 (PDT)''
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	== Week 3 Early Feedback ==		== Week 3 Early Feedback ==