Difference between revisions of "User talk:Eyanosch"

Revision as of 05:58, 11 September 2015

Week 1 Feedback

• I have responded to your question on my user talk page.
• Although we have not yet posted the scores, I want to provide you some feedback on your Week 1 assignment.
• Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
• Good work in writing something in the Summary field for 21/21 contributions, 100% of the time. Keep it up!
• Your assignment is complete except for the following items:
  1. Please put your full name on your user page, not just your user name.
  2. There is a redlink to a page that doesn't exist called Eyanosch under the heading "Curriculum Vitae" that should be removed, or perhaps you meant to link it to your CV. Either way, you need to remove it or link it to something meaningful.
  3. You included both of your e-mail addresses in a way that is not obscured. If you are not worried about bots scraping it from the page and using it to send you spam, you could consider hyperlinking it with a mailto link such as mailto:eyanosch@lion.lmu.edu. However, it is probably best to rewrite it as eyanosch at lion dot lmu dot edu and similarly for your other account.
  4. Your snail mail address is missing. Please provide the address for your LMU mail box.
  5. Under the Education heading, it looks like your coursework belongs to Fullerton College instead of LMU. To clarify, you should swap those two in your list and provide the date ranges of attendance (your most recent attendance in the case of LMU).
  6. Under Career Interests, you should spell out Physician's Assistant because not everyone may know what PA stands for.
  7. You still need to link to a page within the wiki, although you link to your Template page, you should link to something like the Main Page or the Week 1 assignment page.
  8. You did link to the LMU web site as your external link, but your syntax is incorrect. When linking to an external site, you only need one set of square brackets and you use a space instead of a vertical bar "|" to separate the address from the label. Also, if you want things to appear on separate lines, you actually need to skip a line (two returns) instead of just using one return.
  9. In terms of headings, you should not use the single equals sign level on your page because the convention is that this is only used for the top header on the page for the page name. Thus, you need to go down to four sets of equals signs to create three additional levels of headings.
  10. You have used bulleted lists throughout. Please give an example of a numbered list instead.
  11. In terms of the category, please use "Journal Entry" instead of creating a new category for your name.
  12. You have successfully created and used a template, but the content you have place there is really more of a demonstration than something that will be useful for you later. Check out what some of your classmates have done in terms of creating links on their template that they can use in future assignments. Look at the Week 2 assignment page for suggestions on what you should include in your template.
      • In particular, the link from your user page to the shared class journal is missing. However, if you include this on your template, then the link will always be there whereever you invoke the template.
• You can make up the points you missed on this assignment by making the corrections listed above by the Week 2 journal deadline. In particular, you should correct your template so that you can use it the Week 2 journal and beyond.

— Kdahlquist (talk) 22:48, 9 September 2015 (PDT)

I’ve answered your question on my talk page.

—Dondi (talk) 22:58, 10 September 2015 (PDT)