User talk:Rlegaspi
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Week 2 Feedback
- Although, the Week 2 scores have not yet been posted, I want to give you feedback on the assignment that you can incorporate to your your Week 3 submission.
- First, thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
- Your translations are correct.
- You did not include anything by the way of an electronic notebook for this assignment. Although this assignment was pretty straightforward, you still need to document the process of what you did to arrive at the answers, not just supply the answers. Please be sure to do this for your Week 3 submission.
- You wrote something in the Summary field for 35/35 contributions between the Week 1 and Week 2 deadlines, keep up the good work!
- You did include the category on your individual journal entry. However, you should actually put this on your template page, instead of adding it separately to the journal entry page. This way, you will never forget to add it as long as you invoke your template on your journal entry page.
- With regards to your comments on your shared journal entry, as you can see, others found the Kaji and Kaji article difficult to understand. It's often the shortest scientific articles that are the most difficult!
— Kdahlquist (talk) 23:17, 18 September 2015 (PDT)
Week 2 Feedback Response
- Thank you for your feedback Dr. Dahlquist.
- I will definitely include an "electronic notebook" for the Week 3 assignment and I will also include one for the Week 2 assignment since I have the work I did on paper.
- I will fix my template to include the categories for the the assignments from here on out.
- Week 3 assignment is a bit more tricky since I'm not acquainted with code and the command line, but Prof. Dionisio did a good job of explaining a lot of commands and will attempt to finish the individual assignment by the end of tonight.
— Rlegaspi (talk) 17:19, 20 September 2015 (PDT)
Week 1 Feedback
- I answered your question on my User talk page.
- The scores have not been posted yet, but I wanted to give you feedback on your Week 1 Assignment.
- Your individual assignment was late (submitted at 03:01), your questions on our talk pages were late (submitted at 02:38 and 02:42), and your shared assignment was late (submitted at 02:45). In the future, make sure to give yourself enough time to complete the assignment so that you do not submit your work late.
- Your assignment is complete except for the items that I list below. I particularly like how you took advantage of external links in your work history and other areas of your page. Your work history could be improved by making further sub-bullets after you give the location and dates of your employment. You wrote something in the Summary field 100% of the time, good work!
- Missing items:
- You did not send an e-mail to myself and Dr. Dionisio answering the questions whether you had any concerns or whether there was anything else you wanted us to know. Please e-mail us with your answers, even if your answers are "no".
- You need to upload an image and use it on your page.
- You need to upload another type of file and link to it on your page.
- You will have the opportunity to make up some of the points you missed by completing the tasks listed above by the Week 2 deadline, midnight on September 15.
— Kdahlquist (talk) 11:43, 8 September 2015 (PDT)
Week 1 Feedback Response
- Thank you for answering the question.
- I apologize for the late submissions. I didn't expect to work so much over the Labor Day Weekend and was only able to finish my page after the closing shift. I will upload an image of myself and a few images relating to the content on my page; in addition to another type of file.
- Again, I appreciate the feedback. I am going to do a better job of spreading out my tasks and staying true to my weekly study plan.
— Rlegaspi (talk) 13:59, 8 September 2015 (PDT)
I’ve answered your question on my talk page.