User talk:Kwyllie

Week 1 Feedback

• I have answered your question on my user talk page.
• Even though the scores have not yet been posted, I want to provide you with feedback on your Week 1 assignment.
• Thank you for submitting your work on time.
• Your assignment is complete with the following exceptions:
  1. You included your e-mail addresses in a way that is not obscured. If you are not worried about bots scraping it from the page and using it to send you spam, you could consider hyperlinking it with a mailto link such as mailto:kwyllie@lion.lmu.edu. However, it is probably best to rewrite it as kwyllie at lion dot lmu dot edu.
  2. Your snail mail address is missing. Please provide the address to your LMU mail box.
  3. You could flesh out your list of presentations from my lab a little more, giving links to the LMU symposium and WCBSURC.
  4. You wrote in the Summary field for 27 out of 29 contributions, or 93%. That is excellent, but remember, we are aiming for 100% of the time.
  5. In terms of headers, you need to go down one more level to a fourth set of "=" signs.
  6. In one of your bulleted lists, you have a stray bullet. This occurs when you skip a level in a sub-list. For example, if you start with ** and don't have an item with a single * above it.
  7. Please change your category to "Journal Entry".
  8. Your wiki signature is missing from the Class Journal Week 1 page.
     • Thus, the link to your user page from the Class Journal is missing as well because that is created automatically when you use your signature.
  9. You should rename your template page to be your username because such a generic name could easily be confused with one of your classmates.
• You will have the opportunity to make up the points you missed by making the corrections listed above by the Week 2 journal deadline.

— Kdahlquist (talk) 23:38, 9 September 2015 (PDT)

I just realized that my answer on my talk page was a little messed up because the touchpad on my laptop is very sensitive. I meant, organic chemistry, biochemistry, and invertebrate zoology, although the other answer was funnier. :) — Kdahlquist (talk) 23:13, 10 September 2015 (PDT)

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I’ve answered your question on my talk page.

—Dondi (talk) 15:48, 12 September 2015 (PDT)