User talk:Simonwro120 - Revision history

Dondi: Week 11 feedback.

2017-12-10T01:39:49Z

Week 11 feedback.

Dondi: /* Week 9 Feedback */ Add signature.

2017-11-24T03:11:02Z

‎Week 9 Feedback: Add signature.

Dondi: Add week 9 feedback.

2017-11-24T03:02:29Z

Add week 9 feedback.

Dondi: Add week 7 feedback.

2017-11-22T06:25:06Z

Add week 7 feedback.

Kdahlquist: /* Week 11 Team Page Feedback (to address in Week 12) */ more feedback

2017-11-16T22:10:51Z

‎Week 11 Team Page Feedback (to address in Week 12): more feedback

Dondi: Add team page feedback.

2017-11-16T08:12:21Z

Add team page feedback.

Dondi: Add week 5 shared journal feedback.

2017-10-22T02:27:04Z

Add week 5 shared journal feedback.

Kdahlquist: /* Week 4 Feedback */ more week 4 feedback

2017-10-13T23:21:30Z

‎Week 4 Feedback: more week 4 feedback

Kdahlquist: week 4 partial feedback copied from Corinne's talk page

2017-10-10T20:06:43Z

week 4 partial feedback copied from Corinne's talk page

Dondi: Submit week 3 feedback.

2017-09-25T01:26:54Z

Submit week 3 feedback.

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	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 14:10, 16 November 2017 (PST)''		''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 14:10, 16 November 2017 (PST)''
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		+	== Week 11 Feedback ==
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		+	* A number of "good habit" items were not met in this submission:
		+	** Punctuality: last edit at 1:31pm 11/14.
		+	** No link from journal entry to user page.
		+	** No journal category entry.
		+	** No electronic laboratory notebook—note that we have consistently used the term “laboratory notebook” this semester to represent documentation of your process for the week, distinct from the week’s deliverables. No such narrative could be found in the journal entry.
		+	** Acknowledgments section is missing signature.
		+	* Design or development term notes
		+	** “API” was one of the chosen terms—but you must have already known this term because we have had multiple assignments dealing with web service APIs in class. The instructions asked for terms “whose definitions you did not know when you first read the article.”
		+	** There is no formal APA citation for the ''build server'' definition—only a link is given.
		+	* Article outline notes
		+	** Outline was 1 page long in print preview.
		+	** No information was found on how the article might inform your work on the final project.
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		+	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 17:39, 9 December 2017 (PST)

	== Week 9 Feedback ==		== Week 9 Feedback ==

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 === Shared Journal ===
 Questions and “good habit” aspects are all fulfilled, all on-time. Favorite pages are stated alongside the reasons for these preferences.
 == Week 7 Feedback ==

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		+	== Week 9 Feedback ==
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		+	* The “good habit” aspects of your individual journal are completely fulfilled and on-time. Great!
		+	* The electronic notebook has decent detail and is well-integrated with the GRNsight testing and API exploration results.
		+	* GRNsight testing is complete with clear feedback on the results.
		+	* The overall process for going from the gene symbol to the final gene data, with the necessary substitutions, is almost complete but misses the possibility that the '''data/Gene''' web service request might return more than one result (e.g., BRO1). In this case, since you know that you are working with SGD, you will want to pick the entry whose <code>primaryIdentifier</code> property looks like an SGD ID (that is, <code>S#########</code>).
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		+	=== Shared Journal ===
		+	Questions and “good habit” aspects are all fulfilled, all on-time. Favorite pages are stated alongside the reasons for these preferences.

	== Week 7 Feedback ==		== Week 7 Feedback ==

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	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 14:10, 16 November 2017 (PST)''		''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 14:10, 16 November 2017 (PST)''
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		+	== Week 7 Feedback ==
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		+	* The “good habit” aspects of your individual journal are all on point. Your electronic notebook is detailed and organized, and your references section thoughtfully includes the multiple sources you consulted for this assignment.
		+	* All prior web page issues were addressed—great to see that!
		+	* Bootstrap grid layout and flex classes were seen in your page.
		+	* The use of collapse is noted as one of the requested “advanced Bootstrap” features.
		+	* The use of card is noted as the other “advanced Bootstrap” feature, though its usage does not really maximize its potential.
		+	* Both XML and JSON web API calls were adapted from the starter code as requested.
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		+	=== Shared Journal ===
		+	Questions and “good habit” aspects are fulfilled, all on-time. Your comments on being a novice are noted—remember that everyone is a novice at everything at some point in their lives, so as long as you keep learning (you call it “re-learning” but that implies that you’ve forgotten what you’ve learned before; I think what you really mean is that you’re feeling like you’ve started over, which is true because you’ve changed majors but you’re learning ''new'' things, not things that you’ve already learned before but have now forgotten).
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		+	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 22:25, 21 November 2017 (PST)

	== Week 5 Feedback ==		== Week 5 Feedback ==

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	—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 00:12, 16 November 2017 (PST)		—[[User:Dondi\|Dondi]] ([[User talk:Dondi\|talk]]) 00:12, 16 November 2017 (PST)
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		+	I want to add that links to the journal club presentations should be on the page (under Files) and that the annotated bibliography citations would be better organized in a single section. Antonio needs to sign his executive summary with his wiki signature. A consistent format for the executive summaries and reflections will improve the look and organization of the page.
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		+	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 14:10, 16 November 2017 (PST)''

	== Week 5 Feedback ==		== Week 5 Feedback ==

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 Hello everyone, please feel free to leave any comments here! [[User:Simonwro120|Simonwro120]] ([[User talk:Simonwro120|talk]]) 14:17, 4 September 2017 (PDT)
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 == Week 5 Feedback ==

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	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 13:06, 10 October 2017 (PDT)''		''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 13:06, 10 October 2017 (PDT)''
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		+	=== More Week 4 Feedback ===
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		+	* I want to note that you submitted both your individual and shared journal entries on time.
		+	* Your electronic notebook for this week was a little brief. If you look at your partner's notebook, she included some extra details about the syntax you used. Both of you could have said a little more about your gene in your notebook.
		+	* You made a total of 13 edits to the wiki in the window of review and wrote something in the summary field every time, except for once (oops!)--keep up the good work.
		+	* Don't forget to add your wiki signature to your Acknowledgments statement.
		+	* I want to note that Bootstrap itself is a standard library--you seemed to imply in your shared journal entry that you didn't use it at all and coded your page from scratch, is that the case?
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		+	''— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 16:21, 13 October 2017 (PDT)''

	== Week 3 Feedback ==		== Week 3 Feedback ==