User talk:Aporras1

Week 1 Feedback

Thank you for submitting your work on time. Your Week 1 work has been reviewed, and the following points of improvement have been identified. Other than these items, your wiki skills and deliverables checked out OK:

• I don’t see an email from you regarding worries/concerns or additional information.
• You only went to two levels of depth with your headings; the instructions requested at least three levels.

None of these other items were found in your submission:

• Acknowledgments
• References

For your shared journal response, the following requested items were not seen:

• Link to shared response from user page
• Your answer to the first question after doing the readings. Unfortunately, it did not help that your answers were conflated into paragraph form, rather than a point-by-point Q&A. Implied answers were found to most of the questions, except for the first post-reading question.

Please make sure to check off all of the requested items in future assignments more thoroughly. The instructions asked for all of these to be included in your user page and/or shared journal response. Thank you!

—Dondi (talk) 21:42, 11 September 2017 (PDT)