User talk:ArashLari
From LMU BioDB 2017
Week 1 Feedback
Thank you for submitting your work on time. Your Week 1 work has been reviewed, and the following points of improvement have been identified. Other than these items, your wiki skills and deliverables checked out OK:
- Your user page is missing a snail mail address.
- I don’t see an email from you regarding worries/concerns or additional information.
- Your user page was written out in a single save—not a good habit. Treat wiki pages like code: type them a little at a time, saving often and with a summary.
- There is a difference between internal wiki links (double bracket) and external links (single bracket). All of your wiki links unnecessarily use the external full URL style, and no genuinely external link was noted in your user page.
- No bulleted list was seen in your submission.
- A numbered list was seen (in your shared journal response), but the numbers were written out manually. Use the
#symbol to signify a numbered list item.
None of these other items were found in your submission:
- Commented-out content
- Uploaded and linked image
- Uploaded and downloadable file
- Category
- Template
- Acknowledgments
- References
For your shared journal response, the following requested items were not seen:
- Link to shared response from user page
- Link to user page from shared response
- Wiki signature
Please make sure to check off all of the requested items in a future assignments more thoroughly. The instructions asked for all of these to be included in your user page and/or shared journal response. Thank you!
