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===Jonar Cowan's Talk/FAQ===
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==Jonar Cowan's Talk/FAQ==
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== Feedback on Week 1 Assignment ==
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I am posting the feedback on your Week 1 assignment here.
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* Part of your assignment was submitted late (your e-mail about concerns and anything else for me to know; the question posted on my user page) and much of the assignment is incomplete.  Thank you for going back and completing the shared reflection after the editing problem you had.
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* You have the opportunity to make up the points you lost on your assignment by completing the assignment and making the requested changes by the [[Week 3]] assignment deadline. However, you will not have this opportunity in subsequent weeks, so make sure that you complete the assignment.
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** Your e-mail address is misspelled, and should probably be obscured in some manner to make it harder for bots to detect.
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** Your snail mail address is missing.  You can use the LMU address for the Department of your major if you don't have an on campus box.
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** Information about your career interests and goals is missing.
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** Your work experience is missing.
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** You wrote something in the summary field for 3 out of 6 edits for this assignment (50%).  This small number of edits reflects the incompleteness of the assignment.  I would expect that this assignment would require 20-30 saves or more.  Also we are aiming for writing something in the summary field 100% of the time.
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** A link to a new wiki page is missing from your user page.
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** A link to an external web page is missing.
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** You need to have three levels of headers.  You used "===" and "====", but did not use "==".  Please add that level.
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** A numbered list is missing.
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** Commented out code is missing.
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** An image is missing.
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** A link to a file you uploaded is missing.
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** The "Journal Entry" category is missing.  You should add it to your template.
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** Your wiki signature is missing.
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** At the time the assignment was due, the template had not been created.  As you page stands now, you have created your template, but you have not invoked it on your User page.  Please let me know if you have questions about how to do this.
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** At the time the assignment was due, the Acknowledgments and References section were missing.  You still need to add your wiki signature.  The citation to the Week 1 page needs to be in the APA format for a web page.
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* I hope that by the end of this course you will see yourself as a biologist even more!
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''— [[User:Kdahlquist|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist|talk]]) 22:05, 11 September 2019 (PDT)''

Revision as of 21:05, 11 September 2019

Jonar Cowan's Talk/FAQ

Feedback on Week 1 Assignment

I am posting the feedback on your Week 1 assignment here.

  • Part of your assignment was submitted late (your e-mail about concerns and anything else for me to know; the question posted on my user page) and much of the assignment is incomplete. Thank you for going back and completing the shared reflection after the editing problem you had.
  • You have the opportunity to make up the points you lost on your assignment by completing the assignment and making the requested changes by the Week 3 assignment deadline. However, you will not have this opportunity in subsequent weeks, so make sure that you complete the assignment.
    • Your e-mail address is misspelled, and should probably be obscured in some manner to make it harder for bots to detect.
    • Your snail mail address is missing. You can use the LMU address for the Department of your major if you don't have an on campus box.
    • Information about your career interests and goals is missing.
    • Your work experience is missing.
    • You wrote something in the summary field for 3 out of 6 edits for this assignment (50%). This small number of edits reflects the incompleteness of the assignment. I would expect that this assignment would require 20-30 saves or more. Also we are aiming for writing something in the summary field 100% of the time.
    • A link to a new wiki page is missing from your user page.
    • A link to an external web page is missing.
    • You need to have three levels of headers. You used "===" and "====", but did not use "==". Please add that level.
    • A numbered list is missing.
    • Commented out code is missing.
    • An image is missing.
    • A link to a file you uploaded is missing.
    • The "Journal Entry" category is missing. You should add it to your template.
    • Your wiki signature is missing.
    • At the time the assignment was due, the template had not been created. As you page stands now, you have created your template, but you have not invoked it on your User page. Please let me know if you have questions about how to do this.
    • At the time the assignment was due, the Acknowledgments and References section were missing. You still need to add your wiki signature. The citation to the Week 1 page needs to be in the APA format for a web page.
  • I hope that by the end of this course you will see yourself as a biologist even more!

Kdahlquist (talk) 22:05, 11 September 2019 (PDT)