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| + | == Feedback on Week 1 Assignment == | ||
| + | I am posting the feedback on your Week 1 assignment here. | ||
| + | * Thank you for submitting your assignment on time. | ||
| + | * While all of the content requested in the assignment was present, your page was missing many of the wiki skills. All of the items listed in the assignment were completed except for the following items noted below. You have the opportunity to make up the points you lost on your assignment by making the requested changes by the [[Week 3]] assignment deadline. | ||
| + | ** You should obscure your e-mail so that it is less easily picked up by bots. | ||
| + | ** Your snail mail address would look better if it wasn't a bulleted list. | ||
| + | ** What are your career interests and goals? | ||
| + | ** When talking about your independent research, give the time period, like you would for your work experience. | ||
| + | ** You wrote something in the summary field 32 out of 32 times (100%). Keep up the excellent work! | ||
| + | ** Your user page was missing a link to a new wiki page. | ||
| + | ** Your user page was missing a link to a page within the wiki. | ||
| + | ** Your user page was missing a link to an external web page. | ||
| + | ** Please "comment out" something in your code. | ||
| + | ** While you uploaded and displayed an image on your page, you also need to upload and link to a different type of file. | ||
| + | ** The "Journal Entry" category was missing from your page. Please add this to your template page. | ||
| + | ** Your template was missing. | ||
| + | ** You acknowledged your partner, but the required statement and wiki signature was missing. The References section was missing; you should have at least cited the [[Week 1]] assignment page. | ||
| + | * I like how you have made the connection between DNA and a computer code--hopefully the [[Week 2]] readings reinforce this! | ||
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| + | ''— [[User:Kdahlquist|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist|talk]]) 23:19, 11 September 2019 (PDT)'' | ||
Revision as of 22:19, 11 September 2019
Feedback on Week 1 Assignment
I am posting the feedback on your Week 1 assignment here.
- Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
- While all of the content requested in the assignment was present, your page was missing many of the wiki skills. All of the items listed in the assignment were completed except for the following items noted below. You have the opportunity to make up the points you lost on your assignment by making the requested changes by the Week 3 assignment deadline.
- You should obscure your e-mail so that it is less easily picked up by bots.
- Your snail mail address would look better if it wasn't a bulleted list.
- What are your career interests and goals?
- When talking about your independent research, give the time period, like you would for your work experience.
- You wrote something in the summary field 32 out of 32 times (100%). Keep up the excellent work!
- Your user page was missing a link to a new wiki page.
- Your user page was missing a link to a page within the wiki.
- Your user page was missing a link to an external web page.
- Please "comment out" something in your code.
- While you uploaded and displayed an image on your page, you also need to upload and link to a different type of file.
- The "Journal Entry" category was missing from your page. Please add this to your template page.
- Your template was missing.
- You acknowledged your partner, but the required statement and wiki signature was missing. The References section was missing; you should have at least cited the Week 1 assignment page.
- I like how you have made the connection between DNA and a computer code--hopefully the Week 2 readings reinforce this!
— Kdahlquist (talk) 23:19, 11 September 2019 (PDT)
