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=Emma's Talk page=
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== Feedback on Week 1 Assignment ==
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I am posting the feedback on your Week 1 assignment here.
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* Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
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* All of the items listed in the assignment were completed except for the following items noted below.  You have the opportunity to make up the points you lost on your assignment by making the requested changes by the [[Week 3]] assignment deadline.
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** Please include your full name on your user page itself.  Your username appears at the top because it is the name of the page, but you should also include your full name.
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** Your snail mail address needs some additional commas.
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** I did not receive an e-mail from you detailing any worries/concerns or if there was anything else you wanted me to know.  Please send the e-mail, even if the answer is "no".
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** You wrote something in the summary field 42 out of 43 times (98%).  The number of saves tells me that you are saving incrementally, early, and often, which is great!  You are at almost 100% with the summary field which is excellent, too!  Keep up the good work!
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** A link to an external website is missing from your user page.
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** You need to use three levels of headers on your page; you are only showing one so far, the "==" level. So you need to add "===" and "====".
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** Besides the image, you also need to upload and link to a different type of file on your user page.
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** You created your template, but did not invoke it on your page.  Your template page needs to have a list of links to the weekly assignments, your individual journal entries, and the class shared journals.  You could include a link to the template itself for easy navigation.  You should also include the category "Journal Entry" to the template.
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** Please add the Acknowledgments and References sections to your user page.
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* I'm glad the Janovy article led you to see yourself as more of a biologist than before!
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''— [[User:Kdahlquist|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist|talk]]) 12:58, 12 September 2019 (PDT)''

Revision as of 11:58, 12 September 2019

Feedback on Week 1 Assignment

I am posting the feedback on your Week 1 assignment here.

  • Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
  • All of the items listed in the assignment were completed except for the following items noted below. You have the opportunity to make up the points you lost on your assignment by making the requested changes by the Week 3 assignment deadline.
    • Please include your full name on your user page itself. Your username appears at the top because it is the name of the page, but you should also include your full name.
    • Your snail mail address needs some additional commas.
    • I did not receive an e-mail from you detailing any worries/concerns or if there was anything else you wanted me to know. Please send the e-mail, even if the answer is "no".
    • You wrote something in the summary field 42 out of 43 times (98%). The number of saves tells me that you are saving incrementally, early, and often, which is great! You are at almost 100% with the summary field which is excellent, too! Keep up the good work!
    • A link to an external website is missing from your user page.
    • You need to use three levels of headers on your page; you are only showing one so far, the "==" level. So you need to add "===" and "====".
    • Besides the image, you also need to upload and link to a different type of file on your user page.
    • You created your template, but did not invoke it on your page. Your template page needs to have a list of links to the weekly assignments, your individual journal entries, and the class shared journals. You could include a link to the template itself for easy navigation. You should also include the category "Journal Entry" to the template.
    • Please add the Acknowledgments and References sections to your user page.
  • I'm glad the Janovy article led you to see yourself as more of a biologist than before!

Kdahlquist (talk) 12:58, 12 September 2019 (PDT)