User talk:Asandle1 - Revision history

Kdahlquist: add some quick Week 9 feedback

2024-03-21T17:38:09Z

add some quick Week 9 feedback

Kdahlquist: add week 4 feedback

2024-03-18T22:18:58Z

add week 4 feedback

Kdahlquist: /* Week 3 Feedback */ add Week 3 feedback

2024-02-13T20:50:50Z

‎Week 3 Feedback: add Week 3 feedback

Kdahlquist: add section for Week 3

2024-02-13T20:47:53Z

add section for Week 3

Kdahlquist: add Week 2 feedback

2024-02-06T23:38:05Z

add Week 2 feedback

Asandle1: /* Week 1 Feedback */ done fixing it (the week 2 shared reflection)

2024-01-29T23:26:08Z

‎Week 1 Feedback: done fixing it (the week 2 shared reflection)

Asandle1: /* Week 1 Feedback */ I think I signed correctly but underlined to remind myself to get feedback

2024-01-29T23:25:02Z

‎Week 1 Feedback: I think I signed correctly but underlined to remind myself to get feedback

Asandle1: /* Week 1 Feedback */ added references

2024-01-29T23:21:11Z

‎Week 1 Feedback: added references

Asandle1: /* Week 1 Feedback */ invoked template on user page and struck through related text

2024-01-29T23:04:31Z

‎Week 1 Feedback: invoked template on user page and struck through related text

Asandle1: /* Week 1 Feedback */ strikethrough to reflect the change made to the labeling of my PDF

2024-01-29T22:32:50Z

‎Week 1 Feedback: strikethrough to reflect the change made to the labeling of my PDF

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 This my discussion page
 [[User:Asandle1|Asandle1]] ([[User talk:Asandle1|talk]]) 19:47, 17 January 2024 (PST)
 == Week 4 Feedback ==

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 This my discussion page
 [[User:Asandle1|Asandle1]] ([[User talk:Asandle1|talk]]) 19:47, 17 January 2024 (PST)
 == Week 3 Feedback ==

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	== Week 3 Feedback ==		== Week 3 Feedback ==
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		+	* Thank you for submitting your shared SIR2 journal page on time!
		+	* Be sure to invoke your template on each individual journal entry, even those that you are doing with a partner. Because the template did not get invoked, you were missing the category for "journal entry" at the bottom of the page.
		+	* It looks like you have not used your template page in the way it was intended. Your template page is [[Template:Asandle1]]. All of the correct content in on this page: your list of assignments, individual journal entries, class journal entries, the link to your user page, and the category "Journal Entry". However you need to ''invoke'' your template on each of your individual journal entries, including your user page and this week's shared gene page wiki by using the following syntax: '''<nowiki>{{Asandle1}}</nowiki>'''. All of the stuff that you put on your [[Template:Asandle1]] page will then appear whereever you invoked the code with the curley braces. That way, you only need to edit your template page and all the changes you make will automatically appear wherever you invoked your template. Invoke your template at the very bottom of whatever wiki page you are editing.
		+	* You have written something in the summary field for 101/102 edits (99%) which is an incredible amount of edits and summary field rate. Keep up the good work.
		+	* You have all of the requested content on your page except for the following:
		+	** Note that the idea behind your gene summary on your own gene page was to summarize and paraphrase the content that you read about from the source databases. The idea was to synthesize that content into your own words.
		+	** Something odd happened when you translated your gene's DNA sequence using the [https://web.expasy.org/translate/ ExPASy tool]. Using the DNA sequence you provided, the correct amino acid sequence should have shown up in all red in the first frame. Did you paste extra sequences by mistake into the tool?
		+	** Your explanation of the similarities and differences between the databases could have been expanded.
		+	* Wiki skills
		+	** Be sure to use bulleted and numbered lists to organize your content.
		+	** You could have formatted your gene IDs as hyperlinks to each of the databases instead of providing a separate list of hyperlinks. Think about how you can use the wiki syntax to your advantage to format the page.
		+	* Acknowledgments and References
		+	** Acknowledgments and References need to be two different sections, with two different headers, not combined together.
		+	** The Acknowledgments section is where you acknowledge the partners you worked with and the websites you used for style and syntax.
		+	** The Reference section should just have the list of references that were used to create the content for your page. This is like the references section of a paper where you need to list all of the citations you used in alphabetical order. You need to provide full APA-formatted citations. For a website, it is not just the website, but the authors, date, name of the site, URL, and date accessed.
		+	* I'm glad you like the Paul Ford article! He writes a monthly column for the magazine ''Wired'' that you might also like.
		+	* I'm also interested in knowing which of the databases you liked least.
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		+	— [[User:Kdahlquist\|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist\|talk]]) 12:50, 13 February 2024 (PST)

	== Week 2 Feedback ==		== Week 2 Feedback ==

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 This my discussion page
 [[User:Asandle1|Asandle1]] ([[User talk:Asandle1|talk]]) 19:47, 17 January 2024 (PST)
 == Week 2 Feedback ==

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 This my discussion page
 [[User:Asandle1|Asandle1]] ([[User talk:Asandle1|talk]]) 19:47, 17 January 2024 (PST)
 == Week 1 Feedback ==

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 ** <s>Make sure that you Acknowledgments and References section for Week 1 goes on your user page.  In the future these sections will go on the individual journal entry pages.</s>
 ** <u>Don't forget to sign your class journal entry with your wiki signature.</u>
-** Looking ahead, your Week 2 shared reflection should be on the [[Class Journal Week 2]], so you should delete it from your user page.
+** <s>Looking ahead, your Week 2 shared reflection should be on the [[Class Journal Week 2]], so you should delete it from your user page.</s>
 * I'm so glad to hear that the Janovy reading was a favorite for you!
 &mdash; [[User:Kdahlquist|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist|talk]]) 15:51, 25 January 2024 (PST)

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 ** <s>You uploaded and linked to a file, but please fix the syntax so that the link gets a nicer looking label.  Instead of '''<nowiki>[[Media: Andrew_Sandler_Evil_Essay_Final_Draft.pdf]]</nowiki>''' do something like this '''<nowiki>[[Media: Andrew_Sandler_Evil_Essay_Final_Draft.pdf | My essay]]</nowiki>'''.</s>
 ** <s>You created a template, but did not invoke it on your user page.  Use the {{ }} to invoke your template on your page.</s>
-** Make sure that you Acknowledgments and References section for Week 1 goes on your user page.  In the future these sections will go on the individual journal entry pages.
+** <s>Make sure that you Acknowledgments and References section for Week 1 goes on your user page.  In the future these sections will go on the individual journal entry pages.</s>
 ** Don't forget to sign your class journal entry with your wiki signature.
 ** Looking ahead, your Week 2 shared reflection should be on the [[Class Journal Week 2]], so you should delete it from your user page.
 * I'm so glad to hear that the Janovy reading was a favorite for you!
 &mdash; [[User:Kdahlquist|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist|talk]]) 15:51, 25 January 2024 (PST)

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 ** <s>You have used several levels of sections, but they skip around a bit on your page.  They should be nested so that "==" is used first, "===" is below that and "====" is below that.  Going further to "=====" or "======" is not necessary for your page.  See if you can organize it to just use those first three levels.</s>
 ** <s>Please include a numbered list, not just a bullet point list.</s>
-** You uploaded and linked to a file, but please fix the syntax so that the link gets a nicer looking label.  Instead of '''<nowiki>[[Media: Andrew_Sandler_Evil_Essay_Final_Draft.pdf]]</nowiki>''' do something like this '''<nowiki>[[Media: Andrew_Sandler_Evil_Essay_Final_Draft.pdf | My essay]]</nowiki>'''.
+** <s>You uploaded and linked to a file, but please fix the syntax so that the link gets a nicer looking label.  Instead of '''<nowiki>[[Media: Andrew_Sandler_Evil_Essay_Final_Draft.pdf]]</nowiki>''' do something like this '''<nowiki>[[Media: Andrew_Sandler_Evil_Essay_Final_Draft.pdf | My essay]]</nowiki>'''.</s>
 ** You created a template, but did not invoke it on your user page.  Use the {{ }} to invoke your template on your page.
 ** Make sure that you Acknowledgments and References section for Week 1 goes on your user page.  In the future these sections will go on the individual journal entry pages.