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** I recommend that you do not put your gmail address on your User page. This is a public facing website and you are inviting spam by posting it here. | ** I recommend that you do not put your gmail address on your User page. This is a public facing website and you are inviting spam by posting it here. | ||
** I did not receive an email from you about any worries/concerns or if there was anything else you wanted me to know. Please send me an email about this, even if your answers are "no" to both questions. | ** I did not receive an email from you about any worries/concerns or if there was anything else you wanted me to know. Please send me an email about this, even if your answers are "no" to both questions. | ||
| − | ** You wrote something in the summary field 19/70 (27%) of the time. You made quite a large number of edits, which shows me that you are working incrementally. However, please remember to write something in the summary field each time, aiming for >90% of the time. | + | ** You wrote something in the summary field 19/70 (27%) of the time during the period of review. You made quite a large number of edits, which shows me that you are working incrementally. However, please remember to write something in the summary field each time, aiming for >90% of the time. |
** You have created some extraneous wiki pages such as [[New wiki page]], [[Journal Week 2]], [[Journal]], [[Week 2 assignment]]. Please pay careful attention to the names of the pages that you are asked to create, which will be in each week's assignment. Generally the individual journal pages you will create will be called "''username Week 2''", etc. Please go back and delete these extraneous pages, making sure that any relevant content (if any) is moved to the appropriate page first. | ** You have created some extraneous wiki pages such as [[New wiki page]], [[Journal Week 2]], [[Journal]], [[Week 2 assignment]]. Please pay careful attention to the names of the pages that you are asked to create, which will be in each week's assignment. Generally the individual journal pages you will create will be called "''username Week 2''", etc. Please go back and delete these extraneous pages, making sure that any relevant content (if any) is moved to the appropriate page first. | ||
** You used headings on your page, but they are nested down beyond the "====" level that was required by the assignment. Take a look at the organization of your page to see if headers could be used more effectively with just three levels. | ** You used headings on your page, but they are nested down beyond the "====" level that was required by the assignment. Take a look at the organization of your page to see if headers could be used more effectively with just three levels. | ||
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** Please split up your References section into separate "Acknowledgements" and "References"sections, with the appropriate content in each. | ** Please split up your References section into separate "Acknowledgements" and "References"sections, with the appropriate content in each. | ||
* I'm glad the Janovy reading inspired you to consider yourself a biologist! | * I'm glad the Janovy reading inspired you to consider yourself a biologist! | ||
| + | — [[User:Kdahlquist|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist|talk]]) 13:13, 25 January 2024 (PST) | ||
Revision as of 13:13, 25 January 2024
Week 1 Feedback
- Thank you for submitting your assignment on time!
- All of the tasks from the assignment were complete, except for the following which were incomplete or could show some improvement. You will be able to earn back points that you lost by making these corrections by the deadline for the Week 3 assignment.
- I recommend that you do not put your gmail address on your User page. This is a public facing website and you are inviting spam by posting it here.
- I did not receive an email from you about any worries/concerns or if there was anything else you wanted me to know. Please send me an email about this, even if your answers are "no" to both questions.
- You wrote something in the summary field 19/70 (27%) of the time during the period of review. You made quite a large number of edits, which shows me that you are working incrementally. However, please remember to write something in the summary field each time, aiming for >90% of the time.
- You have created some extraneous wiki pages such as New wiki page, Journal Week 2, Journal, Week 2 assignment. Please pay careful attention to the names of the pages that you are asked to create, which will be in each week's assignment. Generally the individual journal pages you will create will be called "username Week 2", etc. Please go back and delete these extraneous pages, making sure that any relevant content (if any) is moved to the appropriate page first.
- You used headings on your page, but they are nested down beyond the "====" level that was required by the assignment. Take a look at the organization of your page to see if headers could be used more effectively with just three levels.
- Your bulleted list in the Personal Interests section similarly goes down very far in nested levels. This would look better as a simple list with one "*" each.
- While the picture of your cat (cute!) is showing up properly on your page, the syntax for the picture of yourself at the top of the page is incorrect. Please fix it so that we can see that image properly.
- For the file upload/link, please use a different file than an image. For example, a .pdf file of your resume or other document you would like to share.
- While you created and invoked your template on your user page, the content of the template needs to be updated for it to be more useful for you in the future. Your list of assignment pages, individual journal entries, class journal entries, and "Journal Entry" category needs to be on your template page. Then when you invoke the template on your user page (and other journal entries), it will appear automatically on the page.
- Please split up your References section into separate "Acknowledgements" and "References"sections, with the appropriate content in each.
- I'm glad the Janovy reading inspired you to consider yourself a biologist!
— Kdahlquist (talk) 13:13, 25 January 2024 (PST)
