User talk:Asandle1

This my discussion page Asandle1 (talk) 19:47, 17 January 2024 (PST)

Week 1 Feedback

• Thank you for submitting your assignment on time!
• All of the tasks from the assignment were complete, except for the following which were incomplete or could show some improvement. You will be able to earn back points that you lost by making these corrections by the deadline for the Week 3 assignment.
  • Please add a snail mail address. You can use the departmental address for your department in the business school.(Complete)
  • The way you describe your work experience is a little vague. Think about how you would represent this on a resume or LinkedIn profile.
  • You wrote something in the summary field for 63/71 edits (89%) in the period of review which is very good. Remember, we are aiming for 100%.
  • There is code showing for "File:Wiki.png" at the top right of your page. I'm not sure if this was supposed to be a picture or was just a test, but it should be removed to make your page look more professional.
  • You have provided links to web pages outside of the wiki in your references section. However, there are extra " [ ] " symbols appearing next to your links. Remember, links interior to the wiki use double square brackets and external links use single square brackets. Please fix your syntax to reflect this.
  • You have used several levels of sections, but they skip around a bit on your page. They should be nested so that "==" is used first, "===" is below that and "====" is below that. Going further to "=====" or "======" is not necessary for your page. See if you can organize it to just use those first three levels.
  • Please include a numbered list, not just a bullet point list.
  • You uploaded and linked to a file, but please fix the syntax so that the link gets a nicer looking label. Instead of [[Media: Andrew_Sandler_Evil_Essay_Final_Draft.pdf]] do something like this [[Media: Andrew_Sandler_Evil_Essay_Final_Draft.pdf | My essay]].
  • You created a template, but did not invoke it on your user page. Use the {{ }} to invoke your template on your page.
  • Make sure that you Acknowledgments and References section for Week 1 goes on your user page. In the future these sections will go on the individual journal entry pages.
  • Don't forget to sign your class journal entry with your wiki signature.
  • Looking ahead, your Week 2 shared reflection should be on the Class Journal Week 2, so you should delete it from your user page.
• I'm so glad to hear that the Janovy reading was a favorite for you!

— Kdahlquist (talk) 15:51, 25 January 2024 (PST)