User talk:Msymond1

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Week 1 Feedback

  • Thank you for submitting your assignment on time!
    • All of the tasks from the assignment were complete, except for the following which were incomplete or could show some improvement. You will be able to earn back points that you lost by making these corrections by the deadline for the Week 3 assignment.
    • Please include a statement about your future career interests.
    • It looks like your research experience and work experience could be combined in one section. This might make it flow better.
    • You wrote something in the summary field 50/61 times (85%) during the period of review. This is pretty good, but remember we are aiming for 100% of the time.
    • The three levels of headings are there on your page, but they appear awkward down at the bottom of the page. Notice how the automatically-generated table of contents appears low on the page because of this. Think about how you can effectively use the headers to organize your page.
    • I did not see where you had commented out a message, <!--example of a comment-->.
    • You created and invoked your template, but the content of your template page could be organized a little better into a list or table. Remember, you are going to add new link to your template as you go this semester and that change will then automatically occur on each page on which you invoked your template.
    • Your Acknowledgments and References section should appear on your individual journal entry (for Week 1, your user page), not the class journal page. Make sure that you include this statement with your wiki signature:
      • "Except for what is noted above, this individual journal entry was completed by me and not copied from another source."
    • Make sure that you sign your class journal entry with your wiki signature as well.
  • I'm glad the Janovy reading inspired you to think of yourself as a biologist!

Kdahlquist (talk) 13:24, 25 January 2024 (PST)