User talk:Marmas

Feedback on Week 1 Assignment

I am posting the feedback on your Week 1 assignment here.

• You submitted your assignment on time, except for the Acknowledgments section. In the future, make sure that the entire assignment is completed on time.
• All of the items listed in the assignment were completed except for the following items noted below. You have the opportunity to make up the points you lost on your assignment by making the requested changes by the Week 3 assignment deadline.
  • Your snail mail address needs a line break between "Biochemistry" and "Los". I think you put it between "Los" and "Angeles" by mistake. Always review how the page looks after you have saved it to catch stuff like this.
  • You wrote something in the summary field 10 out of 11 times (91%). This is excellent because we are aiming for 100% of the time. However, with only 11 saves, you are editing too long before saving your work. I would expect that this assignment would take more like a minimum of 20-30 saves or more.
  • Please remove the category "Profile Page" and replace it with "Journal Entry". It would be best if you put the category on your template page and not directly on the User page.
  • Your template looks good. You should add a link to your User page to your template.
  • You are missing the References section. Even when there are no other references, you need to cite the assignment page using the APA format for a web site reference.
• It's cool that you have a microscope for recreational use!

— Kdahlquist (talk) 21:23, 11 September 2019 (PDT)