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[[User:Icrespin|Icrespin]] ([[User talk:Icrespin|talk]]) 21:57, 3 September 2019 (PDT) | [[User:Icrespin|Icrespin]] ([[User talk:Icrespin|talk]]) 21:57, 3 September 2019 (PDT) | ||
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| + | == Feedback on Week 1 Assignment == | ||
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| + | I am posting the feedback on your Week 1 assignment here. | ||
| + | * Thank you for submitting your assignment on time. | ||
| + | * All of the items listed in the assignment were completed except for the following items noted below. You have the opportunity to make up the points you lost on your assignment by making the requested changes by the [[Week 3]] assignment deadline. | ||
| + | ** You only used your username for your e-mail address; I wasn't sure if this was by design or not. | ||
| + | ** When you report the dates of your jobs, it is customary to say "to present" instead of "to now". | ||
| + | ** You wrote something in the summary field 35 out of 49 times (71%). This is pretty good, but we are aiming for 100% of the time. You have an appropriate number of saves for the length of the assignment. | ||
| + | ** Your page is missing a link to an external web page. | ||
| + | ** You created and invoked your template. But you have unnecessary subpages. Make the list of individual journal links directly on the template page, not on a subpage. Ditto for the shared journals. Let me know if you need further clarification. | ||
| + | ** In the reference section, show the direct URL to the [[Week 1]] page, not to the [[Main Page]] in your citation | ||
| + | * I grew up in Orange near Disneyland and remember visiting the Disneyland Hotel before California Adventure was built and it became Disneyland "Resort"! | ||
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| + | ''— [[User:Kdahlquist|Kdahlquist]] ([[User talk:Kdahlquist|talk]]) 22:17, 11 September 2019 (PDT)'' | ||
Revision as of 21:17, 11 September 2019
This is my talk page. Icrespin (talk) 21:57, 3 September 2019 (PDT)
Feedback on Week 1 Assignment
I am posting the feedback on your Week 1 assignment here.
- Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
- All of the items listed in the assignment were completed except for the following items noted below. You have the opportunity to make up the points you lost on your assignment by making the requested changes by the Week 3 assignment deadline.
- You only used your username for your e-mail address; I wasn't sure if this was by design or not.
- When you report the dates of your jobs, it is customary to say "to present" instead of "to now".
- You wrote something in the summary field 35 out of 49 times (71%). This is pretty good, but we are aiming for 100% of the time. You have an appropriate number of saves for the length of the assignment.
- Your page is missing a link to an external web page.
- You created and invoked your template. But you have unnecessary subpages. Make the list of individual journal links directly on the template page, not on a subpage. Ditto for the shared journals. Let me know if you need further clarification.
- In the reference section, show the direct URL to the Week 1 page, not to the Main Page in your citation
- I grew up in Orange near Disneyland and remember visiting the Disneyland Hotel before California Adventure was built and it became Disneyland "Resort"!
— Kdahlquist (talk) 22:17, 11 September 2019 (PDT)
