User talk:Imacarae

Feedback on Week 1 Assignment

I am posting the feedback on your Week 1 assignment here.

• Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
• All of the items listed in the assignment were completed except for the following items noted below. You have the opportunity to make up the points you lost on your assignment by making the requested changes by the Week 3 assignment deadline.
  • You only used your username for your e-mail address; I wasn't sure if this was by design or not.
  • For your snail mail address, you need a comma between "Drive" and "Los Angeles".
  • You wrote something in the summary field 33 out of 73 times (45%). Your number of saves tells me that you are saving early and often, which is great! However, we are aiming for writing something in the summary field 100% of the time so you have some work to do on that score.
  • I see that you have already removed the "User Page" category from your user page.
  • Be careful about distinguishing between links that are within the wiki and external and using the correct syntax for each one. In some cases, you are formatting an internal link like an external page. Please go back and fix these.
  • The Acknowledgments and References sections were missing from your user page because you put them on a separate week 1 page. Please go back and move them to your user page.
  • You copied the citation to the Week 1 page with the wrong access date. That date is intended to be the date that youaccessed the page.
• Thanks for sharing one of your paintings--I really liked it!

— Kdahlquist (talk) 22:29, 11 September 2019 (PDT)